Believe… :-)
Posted by Soumya Agarwal on September 10, 2009
You are the one who caught my attention
At the very first moment when I heard you
For the first time, I did not plan on love unfloding
I did not sense on you, I being so sweet…..
I Never imagined that I will be undersdtanding
But yes, when I first met you
You made my days go faster and fatser
And now, all the time when I think of YOU
Thoughts of ‘U’ completely consume my mind
Feelings of you completely pour out of my heart
My heart chases, holds me with sweetness
I melt under your care
The blackish-brown eyes I so adore
Hypnotises me and I feel free
Above my face, no worries, no fear
With a passion so comfortable
Your vast glow, flavours my heart
And surrender me always J
Forgetting the day, caught in a moment
Overwhelmed by a vision, Lost in a sleep
It all looked like a most wonderful dream
I shall keep this forever and a day
The captured second, moon broke the darkness
Hearts started beating in a rhythm
Now hands in hands, hearts interlink
Talking, sharing, laughing every day.
What did you see something inside me?
That something made you call
Something thats started it all
You opened the door, allowed me to feel
The smile, the laughter, the wit, the humor and the spirit
Made the world so much less important
What we had and sharing today is really so good
Its an attempt to show you
How important your are to me
To be there in every day, for every reason
I am hoping someday, to share few little words
To see them in your eyes, to hear them in your voice
To know that special moment, when time itself stops
I amuse I could say it too as other do
With every bit of CARE you gave me
Since the day I have met you
I felt my life is complete….
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unknown_admirer said
hello soumya
i have been visiting your blog since a long time but it my first comment which alas i have planned to drop off……….. i love the way you write and display your emotions in words……. I FIND IT VERY DIFFICULT TO DO……. but when i look at the things here you have written and carved them with your feelings………i feel amazing. I feel like you can be a very nice writer….. you are gifted with a talent….. dont let it go anytime…… carve it more beautifully…. and your this poem has touched my heart…….. I could not hold my heart from leaving a comment……. By the way miss soumya…. is this a imaginary poem……. you you really had thought of somebody before typing it down…. i am really very amazed… it is a wonderful piece……I am hoping someday……someone will too feel something about me like this………
Thanks for sharing the poem with all of us…….please its a heartily request…. do not stop engraving your feeling in words…… and write more and more.. looking forward to see more in the line…
best of the best wishes……… hope all you dreams and desires comes true and you grow up and rise like a shinning star……
Your
Unknown Admirer
Soumya Agarwal said
@ Unknown Admirer
thanks a lot for such a wonderful and boosting words
DesiSoul said
This simply represents one-of-the most admirable piece of creation that you have ever come up with. Now, this one specially means a lot to me as “I” know that it is written keeping “me” in mind and so is very near and dear to my heart. This creation of yours to me is like a soothing fresh breeze in the scorching sun. I run short of words in expressing how much important this makes me feel whenever I read through this. I have always been impressed with your fine art of expressing yourself by merely weaving words together, but this one is simply “The Masterpiece” and has turned me into one of your many aficionados.